CHANGING OUR PLAN

In this post I will be talking about a difficulty we found when editing our music video, when we were putting our music video together we realised that most of our shots weren’t following the correct path of narrative we wanted to create, the whole point of our narrative was meant to be that the mental health from my part of the relationship pushes the people who love me away because of how distant it could make me.

The problem we found is our narrative was showing that jade was being the distant person in the relationship, we realised this from one shot where jade wasn’t paying attention to me by looking into her phone the whole time when I was speaking, this made her look like the distant one because she was showing that she didn’t want to be there speaking to me.

The way we solved this problem is by adapting the rest of the shots we had to make it look like I am depressed and my mental health is struggling because of the way I am being treated by jade it is making me feel like I am worthless and I continue to go to places where me and jade had ‘good times’ to look back and try to be happy and find calmness in myself by being on my own in nice places.